Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 band 7.0+ theo từng dạng bài

1. Tổng quan về IELTS Writing Task 1

IELTS Writing Task 1 là một phần quan trọng trong bài thi IELTS Academic. Trong phần này, thí sinh được yêu cầu mô tả thông tin được trình bày trong một hoặc nhiều biểu đồ, bảng, sơ đồ hoặc bản đồ. Thời gian làm bài là 20 phút và yêu cầu viết ít nhất 150 từ.

Để đạt được band điểm 7.0 trở lên trong IELTS Writing Task 1, thí sinh cần:

• Mô tả chính xác và đầy đủ các thông tin quan trọng trong biểu đồ.
• Tổ chức bài viết logic và mạch lạc.
• Sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng và chính xác.
• Áp dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp phức tạp và chính xác.
• Phân tích xu hướng và so sánh dữ liệu một cách hiệu quả.

2. Bài mẫu và bí quyết làm bài Writing Task 1

2.1. Biểu đồ đường (Line graph)

Biểu đồ đường thường được sử dụng để thể hiện sự thay đổi của một hoặc nhiều yếu tố theo thời gian.

Đề bài mẫu: The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample:

The line graph shows the percentage of urban population in four Asian countries from 1970 to 2040, including projections for the future.

Overall, all four countries exhibit an increasing trend in urbanization throughout the period, with Malaysia consistently having the highest proportion of urban dwellers and Thailand the lowest.

In 1970, Malaysia and the Philippines had similar urban populations of around 30%, while Indonesia and Thailand were lower at about 17% and 20% respectively. By 2020, Malaysia's urban population had risen dramatically to approximately 75%, followed by Indonesia at 60%. The Philippines showed steady growth, reaching about 50%, while Thailand remained the least urbanized at 40%.

Projections for 2040 indicate continued urbanization, with Malaysia expected to exceed 80%, Indonesia approaching 70%, the Philippines reaching 60%, and Thailand nearing 50% urban population.

2.2. Biểu đồ cột (Bar chart)

Biểu đồ cột thường được sử dụng để so sánh số lượng hoặc giá trị của các mục khác nhau.

Đề bài mẫu: The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample:

The bar chart compares the expenditure on five categories of consumer goods in France and the UK in 2010, with values given in pounds sterling.

Overall, the spending patterns varied considerably between the two countries across the different product categories. While France allocated more funds towards computers and perfume, the UK had higher expenditures on cars, books, and cameras. Cars represented the highest spending category for both nations.

In terms of automotive purchases, the UK led with approximately 450,000 pounds spent on cars, surpassing France's expenditure of about 400,000 pounds. Regarding technology, France invested around 380,000 pounds in computers, which was notably higher than the UK's spending of about 350,000 pounds in this category.

The disparity in book expenditure was significant, with the UK spending roughly 400,000 pounds compared to France's 300,000 pounds. The trend reversed for perfume, where France's spending of about 200,000 pounds was considerably higher than the UK's 140,000 pounds. The most pronounced difference was observed in camera purchases, with the UK allocating approximately 360,000 pounds, more than double France's expenditure of about 150,000 pounds.

2.3. Biểu đồ tròn (Pie chart)

Biểu đồ tròn thường được sử dụng để thể hiện tỷ lệ phần trăm của các thành phần trong một tổng thể.

Đề bài mẫu: The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample:

The provided pie charts illustrate the distribution of three different sources of electricity—fossil fuels, hydro power, and nuclear power—in four countries (India, Sweden, Morocco, and Vietnam) from 2003 to 2008.

Overall, Vietnam and Morocco did not utilize nuclear power for electricity generation. Notably, fossil fuels were the primary source of electricity in Vietnam and India, while they accounted for only a small share in Morocco and Sweden during the specified period.

In Vietnam, fossil fuels constituted 56% of the total electricity production, whereas Morocco relied primarily on hydro power, with only 5% coming from fossil fuels. In India, fossil fuels accounted for a significant 82% of total electricity generation, the highest among the four countries.

Conversely, in Sweden, fossil fuels contributed only 4% to electricity production. Here, hydro power and nuclear power made up the majority of the electricity supply, contributing 52% and 44%, respectively.

2.4. Bảng số liệu (Table)

Bảng số liệu thường chứa nhiều thông tin chi tiết và đòi hỏi khả năng tổng hợp và phân tích dữ liệu.

Đề bài mẫu: The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample:

The chart illustrates the registration of five different types of vehicles in Australia during the years 2010, 2012, and 2014.

Overall, all five vehicle categories experienced an upward trend during this period, with heavy trucks showing the slowest increase and motorcycles achieving the fastest growth. By 2014, passenger vehicles had the highest number of registrations.

In 2010, the number of passenger vehicles stood at 11 million, significantly outpacing the other categories, being roughly five times that of commercial vehicles. Over four years, registrations of passenger vehicles rose by 18.2%, reaching 13 million, while commercial vehicles increased by 17.4%, from 2.3 million to 2.7 million.

In terms of the other vehicle types, motorcycles began with 570,000 registrations, followed by heavy trucks at 384,000 and light trucks at 106,000. Over the next four years, motorcycles saw the most considerable increase, rising by 30.7%. Heavy trucks also showed growth, increasing to 423,000, while light trucks rose to 131,000.

2.5. Biểu đồ Quy trình (Process)

Biểu đồ quy trình mô tả các bước trong một quá trình hoặc chu trình.

Đề bài mẫu: The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample:

The diagram outlines the step-by-step process of producing carbonated beverages.

Initially, the production can be divided into five main stages, starting with the preparation of water and concluding with the packaging and transportation of the final products for sale.

The process begins with raw water being filtered, followed by the addition of a water softener and various chemicals. The purified water is then pumped through electric heaters and a cooling pipe to a carbonation device, where carbon dioxide is infused into the water.

Once carbonated, the water flows to a mixing tank where coloring, syrup, and flavor are added. The mixture is then filtered before being poured into bottles and cans. In the final stage, the finished beverages are packaged into boxes and transported to supermarkets for distribution.

2.6.Bản đồ (Map)

Biểu đồ bản đồ thường yêu cầu mô tả sự thay đổi của một khu vực theo thời gian.

Đề bài mẫu: The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample:

The two maps illustrate various changes that occurred in Islip town over a 10-year period starting in 2005.

Overall, the town underwent significant transformation following the construction of several new facilities.

In 2005, the main road running from east to west was lined with shops. To the south of this road were two residential areas, while the north side remained rural. A school was situated to the west of the residential zones, and a park was located to the east, both connected to the main road by minor roads.

By 2010, the most significant change was the construction of a dual carriageway surrounding the town. The main road was converted into a pedestrian precinct, leading to the demolition of shops on its northern side. A new bus stop and car park were established, along with a shopping mall positioned between these areas. Additionally, a new housing area was developed, accessible via a minor road connecting to the dual carriageway. More residences were built to the south of the pedestrian zone, and the park was reduced in size to accommodate this new development.

2.7 Biểu đồ hỗn hợp (Mixed chart)

Đề bài mẫu: The table and pie chart gives information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample:

The pie chart illustrates the percentages of different nationalities within the Australian population, while the accompanying table details their distribution between urban and rural areas.

Overall, it is clear that the majority of Australia’s population is of Australian nationality, and most individuals, regardless of their nationality, prefer urban living.

Specifically, 73% of the population identifies as Australian, while British nationals account for 7%, and other nationalities make up 14%. Additionally, 3% of the population comes from New Zealand, 2% from China, and 1% from the Netherlands.

The table indicates that 80% of Australians reside in cities, along with 89% of British nationals and 90% of New Zealanders. Furthermore, a striking 99% of Chinese nationals live in urban areas, as do 83% of the Dutch.

Kết luận

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